MGU Humanities Series — English Composition and Academic Writing
Part II: Sentences, Grammar, and Clarity
Subjects · Predicates · Phrases · Clauses · Clause Relationships
Chapter 7 of 48
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Chapter 7:
Subjects, Verbs,
Phrases, and Clauses

The structural architecture of sentences — subjects, predicates, phrases, independent clauses, dependent clauses, and clause relationships — and how to use them to build precise, powerful academic writing

■ Part II: Sentences, Grammar, and Clarity ■

■ 8 Sections  •  Chapter 7 of 48 ■

Follows Chapter 6: Parts of Speech and Sentence Building  ·  Prepares students for Chapter 8: Sentence Types and Sentence Patterns

Purpose and Overview

Every sentence you write rests on a foundation. Before you can build complex ideas, develop paragraphs, or construct academic arguments, you need to understand the structure beneath your sentences — the invisible architecture that holds meaning together. This chapter teaches you how to see that architecture clearly.

In Chapter 6, you learned how individual words function as parts of speech. In this chapter, you will move from individual words to the larger units they form: subjects, predicates, phrases, and clauses. These are the structural components that make sentences work. Understanding them will help you write sentences that say exactly what you mean, recognize when something has gone wrong in your writing, and revise with confidence rather than guesswork.

Many students have been told to "vary their sentences" or "avoid run-ons" without ever being shown how sentences are actually built. This chapter gives you that foundation. By the end, you will be able to identify the core of any sentence, understand how phrases and clauses expand that core, and use clause relationships to express complex ideas with precision. This material is not merely technical — every skill in this chapter connects directly to the writing you will do in every MGU course.

Opening Question

Consider this sentence: "Having analyzed the survey responses collected from all three campuses, the research team, which had been working on the project for over a year, concluded that the original hypothesis was no longer tenable."

What is this sentence actually claiming? What is its subject? What is its verb? How many clauses does it contain, and how do they relate to each other? By the end of this chapter, you will be able to answer every one of those questions — and write sentences of this kind with purpose and control.

8Sections
7Objectives
30+Key Terms
12+Worked Examples

Learning Objectives

  1. 1Identify the subject and predicate in any sentence, including those with complex or compound structures.
  2. 2Distinguish between main verbs and helping verbs, and explain how modal auxiliaries function in academic writing.
  3. 3Recognize and name the major types of phrases — noun, verb, prepositional, infinitive, participial, gerund, appositive, and absolute — and explain how each functions.
  4. 4Identify independent clauses and explain why they are the foundation of complete sentences.
  5. 5Identify the three types of dependent clauses — adverb, adjective, and noun — and explain their grammatical functions.
  6. 6Explain the relationships between clauses: coordination, subordination, and embedding.
  7. 7Find the grammatical core of any sentence, regardless of its complexity, and use this skill to revise for clarity and precision.

Sections at a Glance

Sections 7.1 – 7.2
The Core of Every Sentence: Subjects and Verbs
Subjects and Predicates · Main Verbs · Helping Verbs · Modal Auxiliaries

Subjects and Predicates

The Two Parts Every Sentence Needs

Every complete sentence in English is built from two essential parts: a subject and a predicate. The subject tells the reader what or who the sentence is about. The predicate tells the reader what the subject does, is, or experiences.

This is not merely a grammar rule. It reflects how human beings naturally communicate. When we speak or write, we identify something — a person, an idea, an object, an event — and then we say something about it. Every sentence, from the simplest to the most sophisticated, does this. Consider the following three sentences:

ExampleThe student revised her essay carefully. ExampleAcademic writing requires precision. ExampleThe committee has announced its decision.

In each case, there is something being talked about — the student, academic writing, the committee — and something being said about it — revised her essay carefully, requires precision, has announced its decision. That pairing is the sentence.

Complete Subject vs. Simple Subject

The complete subject includes everything that names or describes what the sentence is about: not just the main noun or pronoun, but also any modifiers attached to it. The simple subject is just the main noun or pronoun at the heart of the complete subject — the word the predicate is actually making a claim about.

Example 7.1.1
Complete subject vs. simple subject
  • SentenceThe nervous first-year student arrived early to class.
  • Complete SubjectThe nervous first-year student — includes the article, both modifiers, and the noun.
  • Simple Subjectstudent — the noun the predicate speaks to. This is the word that determines verb agreement.

This distinction matters enormously in academic writing, where subjects are often noun phrases carrying many modifiers. Losing track of the simple subject inside a long complete subject is the most common cause of subject-verb agreement errors.

Example 7.1.2
Finding the simple subject in a complex noun phrase
  • SentenceThe long-running debate over the effects of standardized testing on student performance has produced conflicting evidence.
  • Complete SubjectThe long-running debate over the effects of standardized testing on student performance
  • Simple Subjectdebate (singular) — not "testing" or "performance," even though those words appear closer to the verb.
  • Correct Verbhas produced (singular) — must agree with debate, not with the nearer nouns inside prepositional phrases.
Key: The verb agrees with the simple subject — never with a noun inside a prepositional phrase.

Complete Predicate vs. Simple Predicate

The complete predicate is everything in the sentence that is not part of the complete subject — the verb and all that is attached to it: objects, complements, adverbs, and prepositional phrases. The simple predicate is the verb itself, the core word or words that express the action, occurrence, or state of being. It is often also called the main verb.

Compound Subjects and Compound Predicates

A compound subject contains two or more subjects joined by a conjunction and sharing the same predicate. A compound predicate contains two or more verbs joined by a conjunction and sharing the same subject.

Compound SubjectResearch and revision are both essential to academic writing. Compound PredicateThe professor reviewed the drafts and returned them with detailed comments.

Why Subject-Predicate Clarity Matters in Academic Writing

Academic readers expect sentences to be unambiguous about who is doing what. When the subject-predicate relationship is unclear, sentences become difficult to follow. A very common weakness in student academic writing is burying the subject under prepositional phrases and using vague or nominalised verbs in the predicate.

Weak — buried subject, passive construction In the analysis of the survey data, a significant pattern in the responses of participants regarding economic anxiety was found. Stronger — clear subject, strong verb The survey analysis revealed a significant pattern: participants reported high levels of economic anxiety.

The weaker version buries the subject (pattern) under layers of prepositional phrases and uses a passive construction (was found) that eliminates the actor entirely. The stronger version has a clear subject (the survey analysis) and a strong main verb (revealed). The relationship between subject and predicate is immediate and transparent. The principle of making subjects clear and verbs strong begins here, with understanding the subject-predicate relationship at the core of every sentence.

Practice 7.1Identifying Subjects and Predicates

For each sentence, identify: (a) the complete subject, (b) the simple subject, (c) the complete predicate, (d) the main verb.

  1. The results of the three-year longitudinal study have been published in a peer-reviewed journal.
  2. Writing clearly and revising carefully are both essential academic habits.
  3. The proposal, along with supporting documentation, must be submitted by the deadline.
  4. Throughout the history of the discipline, researchers have debated the causes of urban poverty.
  5. The committee's recommendation surprised many observers.

Main Verbs and Helping Verbs

The Role of the Verb

The verb is arguably the most important word in a sentence. It carries the action, describes the state of being, and anchors the sentence in time. A main verb is the central verb in a predicate — the word expressing the core action, occurrence, or condition. A helping verb (also called an auxiliary verb) works together with the main verb to form a verb phrase, modifying the main verb to express time, possibility, obligation, completion, or ongoing action.

SentenceHelping Verb(s)Main Verb
The researchers have published their findings.havepublished
The committee will announce its decision tomorrow.willannounce
The study is being conducted at three sites.is, beingconducted
Students should review their notes before the exam.shouldreview

The most commonly used helping verbs come from a small set of words. The primary auxiliaries — be, have, and do — form tenses and questions. The modal auxiliaries — can, could, will, would, shall, should, may, might, must — express degrees of certainty, ability, obligation, and possibility.

Modal Auxiliaries in Academic Writing

Modal auxiliaries are particularly important in academic writing because they allow writers to express precisely how certain they are about a claim. Academic writers rarely state every finding as absolute fact; they use language that reflects the weight of the evidence.

Absolute claim — usually too strong without complete evidence Higher income causes greater happiness. Qualified claim — more appropriate in most research contexts Higher income may contribute to greater happiness under certain conditions.
Academic Voice — Modal Auxiliaries

Learning to use modal auxiliaries accurately is part of developing academic voice — the ability to make claims that are appropriately confident without overstating the evidence. The choice between causes, may cause, might be associated with, and appears to contribute to is not merely stylistic; it is a claim about how much certainty the evidence warrants. Choose your modals deliberately.

Finding the Verb Phrase

A common difficulty is locating the complete verb phrase when other words interrupt the helping verb and the main verb. Adverbs such as not, never, always, and ever frequently appear between helping and main verbs. They modify the verb phrase but are not part of it. In questions, the subject often separates the helping verb from the main verb. In both cases, identify the main verb first and then locate all helping verbs supporting it — ignore adverbs and subjects that interrupt them.

Verb Phrase with Interrupting AdverbThe study has not confirmed those results. → Verb phrase: has confirmed Verb Phrase in a QuestionWill the committee ever reach a decision? → Verb phrase: will reach

Tense and Aspect

Verb phrases also express aspect — the way an action unfolds in time, as distinct from tense alone. The most important aspects in academic English are the simple (the experiment showed), the perfect (the experiment has shown), the progressive (the experiment is showing), and the perfect progressive (the experiment has been showing). Different disciplines favor different aspects: scientific writing typically uses the simple past for completed research and the present tense for general truths. Understanding verb phrases — not just main verbs — allows you to write with tense consistency and appropriate precision.

Practice 7.2Main Verbs and Helping Verbs

For each sentence, identify the complete verb phrase, the main verb, and all helping verbs. Then explain what the modal auxiliary (if present) communicates about the writer's certainty.

  1. The committee has not yet reached its decision.
  2. Students must submit their drafts before the deadline.
  3. The results may indicate a causal relationship between the two variables.
  4. Has the research team published its findings?
  5. The policy will not be implemented until the review is complete.
  6. These patterns might be explained by several competing theories.
Section 7.3
Phrases as Sentence Units
Noun · Prepositional · Infinitive · Participial · Gerund · Appositive · Absolute

Phrases as Sentence Units

A phrase is a group of related words that functions as a single unit within a sentence but does not contain both a subject and a complete finite verb. Phrases are not sentences; they cannot stand alone. They expand sentences by adding information about time, place, manner, cause, condition, and description. Without phrases, sentences would be stripped down to bare subjects and verbs — repetitive and imprecise.

There are several major types of phrases that appear frequently in academic writing. Understanding each type helps you read complex sentences with greater comprehension and write more sophisticated sentences with greater control.

Noun Phrases

A noun phrase consists of a noun and all its modifiers. The noun at the center is called the head noun. Noun phrases can appear anywhere a noun can: as subjects, direct objects, indirect objects, complements, and objects of prepositions. In academic writing, noun phrases are often dense with information. Recognizing the head noun inside a long noun phrase is essential for subject-verb agreement.

Noun Phrase as SubjectThe long-term economic consequences of the policy remain unclear. (Head noun: consequences) Noun Phrase as Direct ObjectThe committee reviewed the preliminary findings from all three research sites.

Prepositional Phrases

A prepositional phrase begins with a preposition and ends with a noun phrase serving as its object. Prepositional phrases typically indicate location, direction, time, manner, cause, or accompaniment. Common prepositions include in, on, at, by, for, with, about, through, during, between, among, across, after, before, under, over, into, toward, within, without, upon, beyond.

Prepositional phrases are extremely common in academic writing because academic ideas are often relational — they exist between concepts, within frameworks, across time periods, and among populations. They also create a key grammar trap: never mistake a noun inside a prepositional phrase for the subject of a sentence.

Common Mistake — Prepositional Phrase Agreement Trap

Incorrect: The quality of the essays were inconsistent.

Correct: The quality of the essays was inconsistent.

The subject is quality (singular). The prepositional phrase of the essays modifies quality but does not change it. The verb must agree with the simple subject, not with a noun inside a prepositional phrase.

Verbal Phrases

Verbal phrases are built around verbals — words derived from verbs that function as other parts of speech. There are three types: infinitive phrases, participial phrases, and gerund phrases. Understanding them helps you both identify errors and use these constructions skillfully.

The Three Verbal Phrase Types

Infinitive Phrase — begins with to + verb; functions as noun, adjective, or adverb.

Participial Phrase — begins with a present (-ing) or past (-ed/-en) participle; functions as an adjective modifying a noun.

Gerund Phrase — begins with an -ing form functioning as a noun; can serve as subject, object, or complement.

Example 7.3.1
Infinitive phrases in three roles
  • As NounTo revise carefully requires discipline. (Subject of the sentence)
  • As AdverbThe committee formed a subgroup to investigate the complaint. (Explains purpose)
  • As AdjectiveThe student's goal to improve her thesis was clear. (Modifies "goal")
Example 7.3.2
Participial phrases as adjectives — and the dangling modifier error
  • CorrectRevised extensively before submission, the essay earned a strong grade. (Modifies "essay")
  • CorrectAnalyzing the survey data carefully, the researchers identified three patterns. (Modifies "researchers")
  • ErrorHaving reviewed the evidence, the argument became clearer. (Who reviewed the evidence? The argument cannot review evidence — the participial phrase dangles.)
  • CorrectedHaving reviewed the evidence, the researchers found the argument more persuasive. (Now it clearly modifies "researchers")
Participial phrases must be attached to the noun they modify. A dangling modifier is one that has no logical noun to describe.
Example 7.3.3
Gerund phrases as nouns
  • As SubjectRevising multiple drafts strengthens academic writing.
  • As ObjectThe professor recommended submitting a complete draft two days before the deadline.
Study Note — Participle vs. Gerund

Both participial and gerund phrases begin with an -ing form of a verb. The difference is their function: a participial phrase acts as an adjective (it modifies a noun), while a gerund phrase acts as a noun (it can be a subject or object). Ask yourself: Is this phrase describing a noun, or is it naming a thing? If it's describing, it's participial. If it's naming, it's a gerund.

Appositive Phrases

An appositive phrase is a noun phrase placed immediately after another noun to rename, identify, or explain it. Appositives are extremely useful in academic writing because they allow you to define terms, identify people or organizations, and add clarifying information without creating separate sentences.

Appositive PhraseProfessor Winters, the department's writing coordinator, designed the new curriculum. Appositive PhraseThe researchers studied metacognition, the ability to think about one's own thinking processes, across three age groups.

Absolute Phrases

An absolute phrase consists of a noun plus a participle and modifies the entire sentence rather than a single word. Absolute phrases are somewhat uncommon in student writing but appear regularly in sophisticated academic and literary prose. They allow writers to combine two related events or conditions in a single sentence, showing their connection compactly and elegantly.

Absolute PhraseThe survey completed, the research team began analyzing results. Absolute PhraseThe data having been verified by two independent reviewers, the committee approved publication.
Practice 7.3Identifying Phrases

Identify the phrase type of each underlined element and explain what it modifies or how it functions in the sentence.

  1. To improve academic writing, students need consistent feedback.
  2. The study, conducted over eighteen months, examined three populations.
  3. Writing in an academic voice requires practice and patience.
  4. The conference attracted scholars from across the country.
  5. The professor, the department's most published researcher, led the seminar.
  6. The deadline having passed, the committee declined to consider late submissions.
  7. The committee formed a working group to review the policy recommendations.
Sections 7.4 – 7.5
Independent and Dependent Clauses
Independent Clauses · Dependent Clauses · Adverb · Adjective · Noun Clauses

Independent Clauses

Phrases, as you have seen, are groups of words that work as single units but lack a complete subject-and-verb combination. A clause is different. A clause is a word group that does contain both a subject and a finite verb — a verb that is marked for tense and capable of anchoring a complete sentence.

There are two types of clauses: independent clauses and dependent clauses. An independent clause is a clause that expresses a complete thought and can stand alone as a sentence. It contains a subject, a finite verb, and often additional elements, and it makes grammatical and semantic sense on its own.

The Test for an Independent Clause

Can this word group stand alone as a sentence and make complete sense? If yes, it is an independent clause.

The hypothesis was supported by the data. ✓ Complete — stands alone.

Although the hypothesis was supported by the data. ✗ Incomplete — leaves the reader expecting more. The word although makes it dependent.

Joining Independent Clauses

A sentence can contain more than one independent clause. When it does, those clauses must be joined in one of three ways. Using any other method — such as joining two independent clauses with only a comma — creates a comma splice, one of the most common errors in academic writing. Running them together without any punctuation creates a run-on sentence.

MethodExamplePunctuation Rule
Coordinating conjunction (FANBOYS: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so)The first draft was rough, but the revised version showed improvement.Comma before the conjunction
Semicolon aloneThe first draft was rough; the revised version showed improvement.Semicolon — no conjunction needed
Semicolon + conjunctive adverb (however, therefore, moreover, etc.)The first draft was rough; however, the revised version showed improvement.Semicolon before, comma after the adverb

Main Claims Belong in Main Clauses

The independent clause is where your most important claims live. When you make an assertion, offer an analysis, or state a finding in academic writing, that claim should almost always appear in an independent clause — not buried in a dependent clause or compressed into a phrase. The grammatical structure of a sentence guides readers about where to focus their attention. Whatever appears in the main clause receives primary emphasis; whatever appears in a dependent clause receives secondary, modifying emphasis. Use this principle purposefully.

Main claim buried in dependent clause — emphasis is misplaced Although the data strongly suggest a causal relationship, the study found only a correlation. Main claim in independent clause — emphasis is appropriate The data strongly suggest a causal relationship, although the study found only a correlation.
Practice 7.4Independent Clauses

Identify which of the following are independent clauses (IC) and which are not (not IC). For those that are not, explain what is missing or what word makes them dependent.

  1. The hypothesis was not supported by the data.
  2. Because the sample size was too small to allow generalization.
  3. The committee reviewed the proposal and recommended changes.
  4. Which the researchers had not anticipated.
  5. The results confirmed the original prediction.
  6. Although the policy was widely praised by community groups.
  7. Running along the margins of the document were several handwritten annotations.

Dependent Clauses

A dependent clause (also called a subordinate clause) contains a subject and a finite verb, just as an independent clause does. The critical difference is that a dependent clause cannot stand alone as a complete sentence — it depends on an independent clause to complete its meaning. What makes a clause dependent is typically a word at its beginning — a subordinating conjunction or a relative pronoun — that signals the clause's incompleteness and its relationship to the main clause.

Dependent clauses function in three ways: as adverbs, as adjectives, or as nouns. The type of dependent clause determines its grammatical function and, importantly, how it is punctuated.

Adverb Clauses

An adverb clause modifies a verb, adjective, or adverb in the main clause. It answers questions like when?, where?, why?, how?, and under what conditions? Adverb clauses are introduced by subordinating conjunctions.

RelationshipSubordinating Conjunctions
Timewhen, while, before, after, since, until, as, once
Causebecause, since, as
Conditionif, unless, provided that, as long as
Concessionalthough, even though, though, while
Purposeso that, in order that
Resultso...that, such...that
Comparisonthan, as
Punctuating Adverb Clauses

When an adverb clause appears before the main clause, follow it with a comma. When it appears after the main clause, no comma is usually needed.

Before: Because the evidence was ambiguous, the committee postponed its decision. (Comma after the adverb clause)

After: The committee postponed its decision because the evidence was ambiguous. (No comma)

Adjective Clauses (Relative Clauses)

An adjective clause (also called a relative clause) modifies a noun or pronoun. It is introduced by a relative pronoun (who, whom, whose, which, that) or a relative adverb (where, when, why). Adjective clauses come in two varieties with different punctuation requirements.

A restrictive adjective clause is essential to identifying which specific noun is being referred to. Removing it would change the meaning of the sentence. Restrictive clauses are not set off with commas.

Restrictive — No CommasThe students who completed all three drafts showed the greatest improvement. (Specifies which students — essential)

A nonrestrictive adjective clause adds information about a noun that is already fully identified. Removing it would not change the core meaning. Nonrestrictive clauses are set off with commas.

Nonrestrictive — Commas RequiredProfessor Winters, who designed the curriculum, presented at the conference. (Already identified by name — additional info only)
Common Mistake — Restrictive vs. Nonrestrictive

The type of clause — restrictive or nonrestrictive — is determined by whether the information is essential to identification, not by the choice of relative pronoun. Both who and which can introduce either type. Ask yourself: if I remove this clause, does the sentence still refer to the same thing? If yes, it is nonrestrictive (use commas). If no, it is restrictive (no commas).

Noun Clauses

A noun clause is a dependent clause that functions as a noun. It can serve as a subject, direct object, indirect object, subject complement, or object of a preposition. Noun clauses are typically introduced by that, whether, if, who, whom, whoever, what, whatever, which, whichever, when, where, why, how.

Noun clauses introduced by that are extraordinarily common in academic writing because they allow writers to present claims, findings, beliefs, and arguments as objects of reporting verbs. This construction is foundational to how academic writers attribute ideas to sources.

Noun Clause as SubjectThat the policy had unintended consequences became evident within the first year. Noun Clause as Direct ObjectThe researchers found that the correlation was statistically significant. Noun Clause as Object of PrepositionThe debate centers on whether standardized tests accurately measure academic ability.
Example 7.5.1
Noun clauses with reporting verbs in academic writing
  • Example 1The study demonstrates that regular feedback improves student writing.
  • Example 2Critics argue that the policy prioritizes efficiency over equity.
  • Example 3The evidence suggests that early intervention produces the best long-term outcomes.
  • PatternReporting verb + that + noun clause is one of the most common and important constructions in academic source integration.
This construction will be essential in Parts VI and VII when you learn to integrate and cite sources in academic writing.
Practice 7.5Dependent Clauses

Classify each underlined element as an adverb clause (AC), adjective clause (AJ), or noun clause (NC). Then state its grammatical function.

  1. The professor explained that academic integrity applies in every course.
  2. Because the sample size was insufficient, the results cannot be generalized.
  3. The researcher who published the original study has issued a correction.
  4. Whether the new policy will succeed depends on several unpredictable factors.
  5. The city where the study was conducted has a population of approximately two million.
  6. Although the committee approved the proposal, several members registered concerns.
  7. The evidence suggests that the relationship is correlational rather than causal.
  8. The students who completed all three drafts showed the greatest improvement.
Sections 7.6 – 7.8
Clause Relationships, Sentence Core, and Building Meaning
Coordination · Subordination · Embedding · Finding the Core · Rhetorical Choices

Clause Relationships

When sentences contain more than one clause, the relationship between those clauses is never random. Each relationship expresses a logical connection between ideas — cause and effect, contrast, condition, sequence, addition, elaboration. Understanding these relationships helps you both read complex sentences and write them. There are three fundamental ways clauses relate to each other: coordination, subordination, and embedding.

Coordination: Equal Clauses

When two independent clauses are joined with a coordinating conjunction, they are coordinated. Coordination signals that the writer considers both ideas equally important and closely related. The coordinating conjunctions signal distinct logical relationships: and signals addition, but and yet signal contrast or qualification, or and nor signal alternatives, so signals result, and for signals reason.

Coordination is powerful because it respects the independence of both ideas. Overusing it, however — stringing clause after clause with and — produces writing that feels flat or that lists ideas without showing their logical relationships.

Subordination: Unequal Clauses

Subordination places one clause inside a relationship where it depends on another. The dependent clause modifies or qualifies the main clause. Subordination is more flexible than coordination because it can express a wider range of logical relationships and it signals which idea the writer considers primary. Effective academic writers use subordination extensively.

A common weakness in student writing is under-subordination: stringing independent clauses together with and or but when the relationship between ideas is actually more specific than those conjunctions suggest.

Under-Subordination
The data were incomplete, and the researchers could not draw firm conclusions. Because the data were incomplete, the researchers could not draw firm conclusions.

The first version implies the two things simply occurred together. The second version shows the causal relationship explicitly. In academic writing, showing logical relationships is almost always preferable to leaving them implicit.

Embedding: Clauses within Clauses

Embedding occurs when a dependent clause functions as a component of another clause — as a subject, object, or modifier. The most common form is a noun clause operating as the object of a verb. Sentences can also embed relative clauses within noun clauses, and multiple layers of embedding are common in formal academic prose. Learning to parse embedded structures — to find the main clause and understand how each nested clause relates to it — is a genuine reading and writing skill.

Example 7.6.1
Multiple levels of embedding in one sentence
  • SentenceThe committee found that the policy, [which had been implemented without adequate consultation], had created significant inequities in communities where resources were already limited.
  • Main ClauseThe committee found [noun clause]
  • Noun Clausethat the policy...had created significant inequities (object of "found")
  • Relative Clause 1which had been implemented without adequate consultation (modifies "policy" — embedded within noun clause)
  • Relative Clause 2where resources were already limited (modifies "communities")
This kind of complex nesting is common in academic writing. The key is to always find the main clause first, then work outward through the embedded layers.
Practice 7.6Clause Relationships

Combine each pair of sentences into a single sentence using the specified relationship. Write each combination two ways — using coordination and using subordination — then explain which version expresses the relationship more precisely.

  1. The study was limited to a single institution. Its findings are still valuable. (Concession)
  2. The researchers analyzed the data. They discovered an unexpected correlation. (Time sequence)
  3. The policy was revised. Equity concerns had been raised by multiple stakeholders. (Cause)
  4. The funding was withdrawn. The project could not continue. (Condition)
  5. The committee reviewed all the evidence. It reached a unanimous conclusion. (Time sequence)

Finding the Core of a Sentence

Academic sentences can be long, dense, and complex. When you encounter a sentence that seems impenetrable — in a textbook, a journal article, or a peer's essay — the ability to find its grammatical core gives you a reliable way in. Strip away the phrases and dependent clauses, and you will find a simple independent clause: the main claim of the sentence.

This skill is equally essential for revision. When you revise, you often need to ask: What is this sentence actually claiming? Identifying the grammatical core — the main subject and main verb of the main clause — answers that question immediately.

Step-by-Step Method for Finding the Grammatical Core

Step 1: Find the main verb (or verb phrase) — the finite verb marked for tense.

Step 2: Find the subject of that main verb. Remember: the subject will never be inside a prepositional phrase.

Step 3: Remove prepositional phrases, participial phrases, appositives, and dependent clauses.

Step 4: Check that the remaining core makes a complete statement on its own.

Example 7.7.1
Applying the step-by-step method
  • OriginalHaving analyzed the survey responses collected from all three campuses, the research team, which had been working on the project for over a year, concluded that the original hypothesis was no longer tenable.
  • Step 1Main verb: concluded
  • Step 2Subject of "concluded": the research team
  • Step 3Remove: Having analyzed the survey responses collected from all three campuses (participial phrase) and which had been working on the project for over a year (relative clause). Keep the noun clause that the original hypothesis was no longer tenable — it is the direct object of "concluded."
  • CoreThe research team concluded that the original hypothesis was no longer tenable.
Every other element in the original provides context, detail, or background — important, but arranged around this clear core claim.

The Weak-Core Problem

When you discover that a sentence's grammatical core expresses something weak or vague, no amount of sophisticated modification can rescue it. The core must carry a substantive claim. This is one of the most important revision insights this chapter offers.

Weak Core Hidden Under Complex Modification
Despite the numerous challenges encountered throughout the research process and the limitations inherent in any study of this type, the results, which were subjected to rigorous statistical analysis by an independent team, were interesting.

Core: "The results were interesting." The word interesting is evaluatively weak and vague. No amount of modifying complexity can substitute for a substantive claim at the core.

Despite the study's methodological limitations, the results — verified by an independent statistical analysis — suggest a significant relationship between early literacy intervention and long-term academic performance.

New core: "The results suggest a significant relationship between early literacy intervention and long-term academic performance." This is a substantive, specific claim.

Practice 7.7Finding the Grammatical Core

For each sentence, identify the grammatical core (main subject + main verb + object or complement, if any) by stripping away all modifying phrases and dependent clauses.

  1. Having reviewed the extensive evidence gathered over three years of fieldwork, the research team concluded that the original model required substantial revision.
  2. The policy, which had been implemented without adequate community consultation and which had faced significant opposition from the beginning, ultimately failed to achieve its stated objectives.
  3. Despite the methodological challenges inherent in cross-cultural comparative studies, the findings of this project, confirmed by three independent analyses, suggest a significant relationship between early educational investment and long-term economic mobility.
  4. The novel, written in a fragmented, nonlinear style that deliberately resists the conventions of traditional narrative, explores what one critic has called the archaeology of memory.
  5. When considering the complex interplay of economic, political, and social forces that shaped the policy environment of the early period, historians should be cautious about attributing its failure to any single cause.

Using Clauses to Build Meaning

Every decision you make about how to structure a sentence — which idea goes in the main clause, which goes in a dependent clause, which gets compressed into a phrase — is a rhetorical decision. It shapes what the reader understands to be most important, how the ideas relate to each other, and how the writing feels to read. This section brings together everything in the chapter by showing how clause structure serves meaning in academic writing.

Placing Claims in Main Clauses

Constructions that delay or wrap the main claim — phrases like it is worth noting that, it should be observed that, or it is the case that — push the real subject and verb away from the reader unnecessarily. If something is worth saying, say it directly in a clear independent clause. Let the subject-verb relationship carry the weight.

Delayed and weakened It is worth noting that the evidence supports the argument. Direct and clear The evidence supports the argument.

Subordination for Logical Precision

When two ideas are connected in your thinking by a relationship of cause, condition, contrast, time, or concession, use subordination to make that relationship visible to the reader. The choice of subordinating conjunction is itself a claim about how the ideas relate. Different conjunctions tell different stories about the same pair of facts.

Example 7.8.1
Same facts, different logical relationships — the choice is yours
  • CoordinatedThe policy was revised, and equity concerns were addressed. (Relationship vague — what is the connection?)
  • PurposeThe policy was revised in order to address equity concerns. (Revision was the means; equity was the goal)
  • CauseThe policy was revised because equity concerns had been raised by multiple stakeholders. (Equity concerns prompted the revision)
  • ConcessionAlthough the policy was revised, equity concerns persisted among community members. (Revision was insufficient)
Each version expresses a different logical relationship. Choosing the right subordinating structure is a decision about what you actually mean — not just how to phrase it.

Managing Complexity

Complex sentences — those with multiple phrases, dependent clauses, and embedded structures — can express sophisticated ideas efficiently. But complexity for its own sake produces sentences that are exhausting to read. The goal is meaningful complexity: sentences whose grammatical structure accurately reflects the logical structure of the ideas they contain.

Avoid false complexity: sentences that are long and grammatically elaborate but whose content is thin. A sentence should be as long as it needs to be to express its meaning clearly — and no longer. The best approach is to build outward from a clear core: start with a clear subject and a strong main verb, then add what the sentence genuinely needs — a dependent clause to express a condition, a participial phrase to provide background, an appositive to define a term. Stop when the sentence has expressed its idea completely and clearly.

Example 7.8.2
Building from a clear core outward
  • CoreThe data reveal a pattern.
  • + DetailThe data reveal a consistent pattern across all three samples.
  • + ContextCollected over two years, the data reveal a consistent pattern across all three samples.
  • + QualificationCollected over two years, the data reveal a consistent pattern across all three samples, although the pattern weakens in the final quarter of the study period.
Each step adds meaning without obscuring the core. The sentence grows, but it remains anchored to a clear subject (the data) and a clear verb (reveal).
Practice 7.8Revision for Clause Clarity

Revise each sentence to improve the placement of the main claim or to use subordination more effectively. Be prepared to explain your revision choices.

  1. The experiment was interesting, and we found a significant correlation, and the results were unexpected.
  2. It should be noted that the evidence strongly supports the conclusion.
  3. Although the policy was widely praised by legislators and community groups, it was introduced in the spring.
  4. The data were collected, and the researchers analyzed them, and they found three consistent patterns.
  5. There are many factors that can be seen to contribute to the phenomenon of academic underperformance among students from low-income backgrounds.

Chapter Summary

Key Terms

absolute phrase
A phrase consisting of a noun plus a participle that modifies the entire sentence rather than a single word.
adverb clause
A dependent clause that modifies a verb, adjective, or adverb; introduced by a subordinating conjunction.
adjective clause
A dependent clause that modifies a noun or pronoun; introduced by a relative pronoun or adverb.
appositive phrase
A noun phrase placed immediately after another noun to rename or explain it.
clause
A group of words containing both a subject and a finite verb.
complete predicate
The verb and everything associated with it in the predicate.
complete subject
The main noun or pronoun and all its modifiers.
compound predicate
Two or more verbs sharing the same subject, joined by a conjunction.
compound subject
Two or more subjects sharing the same predicate, joined by a conjunction.
coordination
A grammatical relationship in which two clauses are treated as equal and joined by a coordinating conjunction.
dangling modifier
A participial phrase that lacks a logical noun to modify in the sentence.
dependent clause
A clause containing a subject and verb that cannot stand alone as a sentence; also called a subordinate clause.
embedding
A structure in which one clause functions as a component of another clause — as subject, object, or modifier.
finite verb
A verb marked for tense and capable of serving as the main verb of a sentence.
gerund phrase
A phrase beginning with an -ing form functioning as a noun.
head noun
The main noun at the center of a noun phrase.
helping verb
A verb that works with a main verb to form a verb phrase; also called an auxiliary verb.
independent clause
A clause that contains a subject and verb and can stand alone as a complete sentence; also called a main clause.
infinitive phrase
A phrase beginning with to + verb, functioning as noun, adjective, or adverb.
main verb
The central verb in a verb phrase that expresses the core action or state of being.
modal auxiliary
A helping verb (can, could, will, would, shall, should, may, might, must) that expresses ability, obligation, probability, or possibility.
nonrestrictive clause
A relative clause that provides additional but non-essential information; set off with commas.
noun clause
A dependent clause that functions as a noun within a sentence.
noun phrase
A noun and all its modifiers.
participial phrase
A phrase beginning with a present or past participle that functions as an adjective modifying a noun.
phrase
A group of related words functioning as a single unit but lacking a complete subject-and-finite-verb combination.
predicate
The part of a sentence that says something about the subject.
prepositional phrase
A phrase beginning with a preposition and ending with a noun phrase.
restrictive clause
A relative clause essential to identifying the noun it modifies; not set off with commas.
simple predicate
The main verb of the predicate; also called the simple verb.
simple subject
The main noun or pronoun at the center of the complete subject; governs verb agreement.
subordinating conjunction
A conjunction (because, although, when, if, since, etc.) that introduces an adverb clause and makes it dependent.
subordination
A grammatical relationship in which one clause depends on another to complete its meaning.
under-subordination
The overuse of coordination (especially and) when a more precise logical relationship could be expressed through subordination.
verbal
A word derived from a verb that functions as a noun, adjective, or adverb (infinitive, participle, gerund).
verb phrase
A main verb plus one or more helping verbs working together in the predicate.

Review Questions

  1. What is the difference between a complete subject and a simple subject? Why does this distinction matter for subject-verb agreement?
  2. What is a helping verb, and how do modal auxiliaries function differently from the primary auxiliaries (be, have, do)?
  3. Explain the difference between a phrase and a clause. Why is this distinction important for understanding sentence structure?
  4. What is a participial phrase, and what error occurs when a participial phrase lacks a clear noun to modify?
  5. What distinguishes an independent clause from a dependent clause? Give an original example of each.
  6. Identify and explain the three types of dependent clauses. What grammatical function does each type perform?
  7. What is the difference between a restrictive and a nonrestrictive relative clause? How does this distinction affect punctuation?
  8. Explain the difference between coordination and subordination. When is subordination preferable in academic writing?
  9. What is a noun clause, and why is this type of clause particularly common in academic writing?
  10. Describe the step-by-step method for finding the grammatical core of a complex sentence. Why is this skill useful both for reading and for revision?

Discussion and Writing Prompts

  1. The Value of Complexity. Consider this claim: a sentence should be as complex as it needs to be to express its idea — not more, not less. Do you agree? What are the risks of oversimplifying sentences in academic writing? What are the risks of making them unnecessarily complex? Write a paragraph responding to this claim with a specific example from your own reading or writing.
  2. Subordination and Argument. Choose a topic you know something about — a current issue in education, science, politics, or culture. Write three separate sentences about that topic: one using an adverb clause of cause (because), one using an adverb clause of concession (although), and one using an adverb clause of condition (if). Then discuss how each sentence implies a different argumentative stance toward the topic.
  3. Reading for Structure. Find a paragraph from an academic article or a well-written newspaper opinion piece. Choose one complex sentence from that paragraph. Using the method from Section 7.7, identify the grammatical core of the sentence and explain what each phrase and dependent clause adds to the meaning.
  4. Your Own Sentence Patterns. Look at a paragraph you have written recently for any course. Identify the simple subject and main verb of each sentence. Are there patterns? Do your sentences tend to have strong, clear subjects or buried, vague ones? Do your verbs carry weight, or do they rely heavily on forms of be? What do your sentence structures suggest about your current writing habits?

Chapter 7 Checkpoint

Chapter 7 Checkpoint
Complete without assistance — assesses all key skills and concepts from Chapter 7
Section 1 — Vocabulary and Concepts
  1. Define subject and predicate and explain why the simple subject — not the nearest noun — governs verb agreement.
  2. What is the difference between a main verb and a helping verb? Give an example of a verb phrase that contains both.
  3. Explain the difference between a phrase and a clause. Why can a phrase not stand alone as a sentence, while an independent clause can?
  4. What makes a clause dependent? Give one example of a word that can turn an independent clause into a dependent one.
Section 2 — Identification Skills
  1. In this sentence, identify: (a) the complete subject, (b) the simple subject, (c) the main verb, (d) any helping verbs: The committee's recommendations regarding curriculum reform have not yet been implemented.
  2. Identify the phrase type of each underlined element: (a) To submit a complete draft is required. (b) Written overnight, the essay still needed revision. (c) The study was conducted over three academic years. (d) The professor, the program's founder, retired last spring.
  3. Classify each dependent clause as adverb (AC), adjective (AJ), or noun (NC): (a) that the evidence was inconclusive — (b) because the deadline had passed — (c) which the committee had approved — (d) whether the results could be replicated
Section 3 — Sentence Core
  1. Find the grammatical core of this sentence: Although several committee members had raised concerns during the initial review, the proposal, which had been revised three times since its first submission, was ultimately approved by a narrow margin.
  2. Find the grammatical core of this sentence and evaluate whether it makes a substantive claim: In light of the various factors that have been discussed throughout the course of this analysis, it can be seen that the situation is a complex one. If the core is weak, write a revised version with a stronger core.
Section 4 — Application and Revision
  1. Combine the following two sentences using subordination to show the most logical relationship between them. Be prepared to explain your conjunction choice: The study's sample size was small. The findings align with several larger studies.
  2. Revise the following sentence so that the main claim appears in the independent clause rather than in the dependent clause: Although the survey data clearly demonstrate that students benefit from peer review, the practice is rarely used in first-year writing courses.
  3. The following sentence contains a dangling modifier. Identify it and write a corrected version: Having analyzed the data carefully, a clear pattern emerged in the results.

Chapter Checklist

Before moving on, confirm that you can do the following:

Looking Ahead
Chapter 8: Sentence Types and Sentence Patterns

Chapter 7 gave you the structural foundation: you can now identify subjects, predicates, phrases, and clauses, and you understand how independent and dependent clauses relate to one another. Chapter 8 will build on this foundation by examining the four sentence types — simple, compound, complex, and compound-complex — and showing how each creates different rhythms, relationships, and emphases for the reader. You will learn how sentence patterns affect the experience of reading academic prose and how to vary them with purpose. The skills from Chapters 6, 7, and 8 together form the core of sentence-level writing competence that every subsequent chapter in this textbook will assume you have.

MGU Library Connection
  • Chapter 6: Parts of Speech and Sentence Building — prerequisite for this chapter
  • Chapter 8: Sentence Types and Sentence Patterns — direct continuation of this chapter's content
  • Chapter 11: Common Sentence Errors — applies the clause concepts from this chapter to fragments, run-ons, and comma splices
  • Chapter 12: Punctuation for Academic Writing — applies the restrictive/nonrestrictive distinction and clause-joining rules
  • Chapter 36: Integrating Sources into Academic Writing — relies on noun clause structure (reporting verb + that + noun clause)
  • MGU Dictionary entries: clause, dependent clause, independent clause, subordination, phrase, predicate, subject