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Unit I — الدِّقَّة وَالسَّيْطَرَة الأُسْلُوبِيَّة (Precision and Stylistic Control) — Chapter 5
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تَرْكِيب ١: خِطَاب دَقِيق وَمُحْكَمChapter 5: Unit I Synthesis

Closing Unit I · Speak and Write Arabic: Mastery, Precision, Rhetoric, and Specialized Expression

Chapter Overview

Unit I Synthesis — No New Language System

Across Chapters 1 through 4, هَنَاء learned to choose the right register for a reader, build an argument that anticipates its own objections, control the density of a passage without losing its meaning, and mediate a source across languages and registers for a reader who cannot access it directly. This chapter asks her to do all four at once. Her office has been asked to prepare a single mediated dossier for an upcoming interagency review: a formal written brief, a compressed executive digest of the same content, a short spoken briefing for the meeting itself, and an English-language mediation of the Arabic decision for colleagues abroad who will read the file afterward. No new grammar, vocabulary domain, or clause system appears in this chapter. The work is integration — using everything already consolidated through Volume IV and Chapters 1 through 4 as one coherent, polished performance, matched precisely to each reader in the file.

Learning Objectives

By the end of this chapter, you will be able to:

  1. Combine register precision, argument structure, density control, and mediation judgment within a single set of linked documents.
  2. Produce a formal written brief that states a position, anticipates a counterargument, and qualifies its claim appropriately for its audience.
  3. Compress that same brief into an executive digest without weakening its essential claim or its evidence.
  4. Deliver a short spoken briefing of the dossier's content at a pace and register suitable for a live meeting.
  5. Mediate the dossier's essential content into English for a reader who cannot read the Arabic original.
  6. Evaluate a complete mediated dossier against a single set of criteria spanning register, argument, density, and fidelity of meaning.

Opening Communication Scenario

The interagency review board has requested a complete file on the community center renovation decision covered in earlier chapters, now expanded into a formal recommendation. هَنَاء's supervisor lays out what the file must contain: a full written brief for the board's record, a one-page digest for members who will skim it before the meeting, a two-minute spoken briefing for the meeting itself, and an English summary for an international partner who will read the file afterward but was not in the room. "This is everything you've learned this unit," her supervisor says. "One position, four readers, four treatments — and it all has to sound like the same person wrote it." هَنَاء must produce all four pieces from the same underlying content, adjusting register, density, medium, and language for each reader without ever changing what the file actually claims.

  1. You will draft a formal written brief stating a position and anticipating a counterargument.
  2. You will compress that brief into a one-page executive digest.
  3. You will prepare and deliver a short spoken briefing of the same content.
  4. You will mediate the dossier's essential content into English for a reader outside the meeting.
  5. You will evaluate your complete file against an integrated set of criteria.
مُفْرَدَات التَّرْكِيب — Vocabulary of Synthesis

Core Vocabulary

This chapter introduces no new vocabulary domain. The terms below name the four linked components of the dossier itself and were selected from vocabulary already active across Chapters 1 through 4, so that the file's parts can be named precisely without new lexical load.

ArabicMeaningFunctionExample
المَلَفّ المُتَكَامِلintegrated file / dossiernames the complete set of linked documents produced this chapterيَضُمّ المَلَفّ المُتَكَامِل أَرْبَعَة عَنَاصِر مُرْتَبِطَة بِبَعْضِهَا
المُذَكِّرَة الرَّسْمِيَّةformal written briefthe full-length position document that anchors the dossierتُقَدِّم المُذَكِّرَة الرَّسْمِيَّة المَوْقِف كَامِلًا مَع أَدِلَّتِه
المُوجَز التَّنْفِيذِيّexecutive digestthe compressed, single-page version of the same briefيُتِيح المُوجَز التَّنْفِيذِيّ لِلْأَعْضَاء الاطِّلَاع سَرِيعًا قَبْل الاجْتِمَاع
الإِحَاطَة الشَّفَهِيَّةspoken briefingthe live, delivered version prepared for the meeting itselfتَسْتَغْرِق الإِحَاطَة الشَّفَهِيَّة دَقِيقَتَيْن فَقَط
الاتِّسَاق الأُسْلُوبِيّstylistic consistencythe requirement that every version reflect a single coherent positionيَجِب الحِفَاظ عَلَى الاتِّسَاق الأُسْلُوبِيّ بَيْن عَنَاصِر المَلَفّ
وَحْدَة المَوْقِفunity of positionthe standard that all four versions state the same underlying claimتَضْمَن وَحْدَة المَوْقِف أَلَّا يَتَنَاقَض أَيّ عُنْصُر مَع الآخَر
التَّكَيُّف مَع الجُمْهُورaudience adaptationadjusting register, density, medium, or language for each stated readerيَتَطَلَّب كُلّ عُنْصُر فِي المَلَفّ تَكَيُّفًا مَع الجُمْهُور

Every term above labels a relationship among the dossier's parts rather than a new topic. The grammar, argument, density, and mediation systems used to build each part were consolidated in Chapters 1 through 4 and in Volume IV.

صَوْت المَلَفّ المُقَدَّم — The Sound of a Delivered Dossier

The Sound of a Delivered Dossier

Sound and Style — Matching delivery to a live, mixed-audience meeting

A two-minute spoken briefing delivered to a review board draws on the phrase-grouping and pacing control practiced for spoken mediation in Chapter 4, but it must also carry the argumentative shape from Chapter 2: a stated position, a brief acknowledgment of the strongest objection, and a clear conclusion, all audible through pacing and pause alone. Slow slightly before the stated position, pause briefly before naming the objection so listeners register the shift, and close at a measured pace so the recommendation lands clearly. No new pronunciation target is introduced; this is the same formal reading and phrase-grouping control from Volume IV and Chapters 1 through 4, applied to a briefing that must carry an argument, not only information.

Practice reading your spoken briefing aloud twice: once focused only on clarity of phrasing, and once focused on making the position, the acknowledged objection, and the conclusion audibly distinct from one another.

أَرْبَعَة عَنَاصِر، صَوْت وَاحِد — Synthesis: Four Skills, One Voice

Synthesis: Four Skills, One Voice

This is a synthesis checkpoint. No new clause type, case rule, mood environment, or vocabulary domain is introduced. The target is combining four systems already consolidated — register precision, argument structure, density control, and mediation judgment — into one internally consistent set of documents.

The Dossier-Building Sequence

تَحْدِيد المَوْقِف الوَاحِد ← صِيَاغَة المُذَكِّرَة الرَّسْمِيَّة ← تَكْثِيفُهَا فِي مُوجَز ← إِعْدَاد إِحَاطَة شَفَهِيَّة ← وَسَاطَتُهَا لِجُمْهُور آخَر

fix the single position → draft the formal brief → compress it into a digest → prepare a spoken briefing → mediate it for another audience

هَل تَقُول كُلّ نُسْخَة الشَّيْء نَفْسَه، بِطَرِيقَة مُخْتَلِفَة؟

Does every version say the same thing, in a different way?

The sequence above is not new grammar; it is the order in which the four systems from this unit are applied to one underlying position. Fixing the position first is essential: every later version — however compressed, however mediated — must trace back to that same claim, evidence, and qualification, or the dossier loses the unity of position introduced in this chapter's vocabulary.

From Brief to Digest: Density Without Distortion

Compressing the formal brief into an executive digest applies the nominalization and compression tools from Chapter 3 directly to argumentative content. The digest must keep the position, the strongest acknowledged objection, and the conclusion — the argumentative skeleton from Chapter 2 — even though most supporting detail is cut.

  • مُذَكِّرَة (مُقْتَطَف): عَلَى الرَّغْم مِن ارتِفَاع التَّكْلُفَة المُتَوَقَّعَة لِلْمُقْتَرَح، فَإِنَّ المَنَافِع طَوِيلَة الأَمَد تُبَرِّر المُضِيّ فِيه، شَرِيطَة إِعَادَة النَّظَر فِي المِيزَانِيَّة قَبْل الاعْتِمَاد النِّهَائِيّ.Formal brief: "Despite the proposal's higher projected cost, its long-term benefits justify proceeding, provided the budget is reviewed before final approval."
  • مُوجَز: نُوصِي بِالمُضِيّ فِي المُقْتَرَح بَعْد مُرَاجَعَة مِيزَانِيَّتِه.Digest: "We recommend proceeding with the proposal after its budget is reviewed."

The digest omits the explicit acknowledgment of cost and the phrase naming long-term benefit, but it preserves the recommendation and its condition — the position survives compression intact, exactly as Chapter 3 required when density increases.

Grammar Note — Synthesis is coordination, not new structure

Nothing in this chapter requires grammar beyond what Chapters 1 through 4 and Volume IV already consolidated: register selection, thesis-and-concession argument structure, nominalized compression and expansion, and mediation judgment across languages and registers. What is new is coordinating all four so that a reader who compared every version of the dossier side by side would find one position, stated with appropriate precision for each format, never four different claims.

Mediating the Dossier for an Outside Reader

The English mediation for the international partner applies Chapter 4's mediation-decision sequence to the finished Arabic file rather than to a new source. The partner needs the recommendation, the condition attached to it, and enough context to understand why the board reviewed the proposal at all — not a translation of every document in the dossier.

Arabic Digest — For the board

نُوصِي بِالمُضِيّ فِي المُقْتَرَح بَعْد مُرَاجَعَة مِيزَانِيَّتِه.

English Mediation — For the international partner

The board is recommending that the renovation proposal move forward, on the condition that its budget is reviewed first. A final decision is expected once that review is complete.

The English version adds one clause of context — that a final decision follows the budget review — because the partner was not in the meeting and needs that orientation to understand the recommendation. This is a deliberate, justified addition of the kind Chapter 4 authorized, not a change to the file's essential claim.

حِوَار نَمُوذَجِيّ — Model Exchange

Model Exchange: Checking the File for Unity of Position

Setting: هَنَاء reviews her completed dossier with a colleague before submitting it, checking that all four versions agree.

الزَّمِيل: هَل المُوجَز يَتَّفِق مَع المُذَكِّرَة، أَم أَنَّه يُغَيِّر المَوْقِف؟Does the digest agree with the brief, or does it change the position?
هَنَاء: يَتَّفِق تَمَامًا. حَذَفْتُ التَّفَاصِيل فَقَط، لَا الشَّرْط وَلَا التَّوْصِيَة.It agrees completely. I only cut the details, not the condition or the recommendation.
الزَّمِيل: وَالإِحَاطَة الشَّفَهِيَّة؟ هَل سَتَذْكُرِين الاعْتِرَاض عَلَى التَّكْلُفَة؟And the spoken briefing? Will you mention the objection about cost?
هَنَاء: بِاخْتِصَار، نَعَم. الأَعْضَاء يَعْرِفُونَه، لَكِن يَنْبَغِي أَن يَسْمَعُوا أَنَّنَا أَخَذْنَاه بِعَيْن الاعْتِبَار.Briefly, yes. The members already know it, but they should hear that we took it into account.
الزَّمِيل: وَالنُّسْخَة الإِنْجْلِيزِيَّة لِلشَّرِيك الدَّوْلِيّ؟And the English version for the international partner?
هَنَاء: أَضَفْتُ جُمْلَة وَاحِدَة لِلسِّيَاق، لِأَنَّهُم لَم يَحْضُرُوا الاجْتِمَاع، لَكِنَّ المَوْقِف نَفْسَه بِالضَّبْط.I added one sentence of context, because they weren't at the meeting, but it's the exact same position.
الزَّمِيل: إِذَن المَلَفّ جَاهِز. أَرْبَعَة أَشْكَال، مَوْقِف وَاحِد.Then the file is ready. Four formats, one position.

Note how the colleague's review checks each version against the same standard — unity of position — rather than checking each in isolation. That is the central discipline of this synthesis chapter.

Listening Practice

Ask your instructor, a partner, or a text-to-speech tool to read the passage below aloud at a pace suitable for a formal spoken briefing, as described in this chapter's pronunciation section.

مُقْتَطَف — Excerpt (a spoken briefing opening)

تُوصِي اللَّجْنَة بِالمُضِيّ فِي مُقْتَرَح التَّجْدِيد، عَلَى الرَّغْم مِن ارتِفَاع تَكْلُفَتِه المُتَوَقَّعَة، شَرِيطَة إِعَادَة النَّظَر فِي المِيزَانِيَّة قَبْل الاعْتِمَاد النِّهَائِيّ.

مُهِمَّة الاسْتِمَاع — Listening task

  1. State, in one sentence, the position this passage recommends and the condition attached to it.
  2. Identify the phrase that acknowledges an objection, and explain how it functions within the argument structure from Chapter 2.
  3. Identify one nominalized phrase in the passage and give its expanded verbal equivalent.
  4. Rewrite this passage as a one-sentence digest suitable for a reader who will only skim the file.

Speaking Practice

تَدْرِيب مُوَجَّه — Controlled practice: State it four ways

Your instructor or partner will give you a short position and one objection to it (for example, a workplace policy change and a cost or scheduling concern). State the position aloud four times in sequence: as a full formal statement with the objection acknowledged, as a one-sentence digest, as a brief two-sentence spoken briefing, and as an English mediation for someone who was not present.

  1. Position: extending office hours by one hour daily. Objection: staff scheduling conflicts.
  2. Position: adopting a new reporting software. Objection: a two-week training period.

مُهِمَّة تَوَاصُل — Communicative task: Brief the board

Working from the dossier you will draft in the Writing Workshop below, deliver your two-minute spoken briefing to a partner playing the role of a review-board member. Your partner should ask one question that requires you to restate the condition attached to your recommendation without reading from your written brief.

لِلْمُتَعَلِّمِينَ المُسْتَقِلِّينَ — Solo alternative

Record yourself delivering your spoken briefing twice: once addressed to Arabic-speaking colleagues in the room, and once as a brief English mediation for a colleague joining by phone who has not seen the file. Listen back and confirm that both versions state the same recommendation and condition.

Reading Practice

Read the three linked excerpts below — drawn from one dossier — then answer the questions that follow.

مِن المُذَكِّرَة الرَّسْمِيَّة — From the formal brief

دَرَسَت اللَّجْنَة المُقْتَرَح مِن جَمِيع جَوَانِبِه، وَعَلَى الرَّغْم مِن أَنَّ بَعْض الأَعْضَاء أَبْدَوْا تَحَفُّظًا بِشَأْن التَّكْلُفَة المُرْتَفِعَة، فَإِنَّ المَنَافِع المُتَوَقَّعَة عَلَى المَدَى الطَّوِيل تُرَجِّح كَفَّة المُضِيّ فِي المُقْتَرَح، شَرِيطَة إِخْضَاع مِيزَانِيَّتِه لِمُرَاجَعَة إِضَافِيَّة.

مِن المُوجَز التَّنْفِيذِيّ — From the executive digest

نُوصِي بِالمُضِيّ فِي المُقْتَرَح بَعْد مُرَاجَعَة مِيزَانِيَّتِه.

مِن الوَسَاطَة الإِنْجْلِيزِيَّة — From the English mediation

"The committee is recommending that the proposal proceed, despite some members' concern about cost, on the condition that its budget undergoes further review."

أَسْئِلَة الفَهْم — Comprehension questions:

  1. Identify the single position all three excerpts share, stated in one sentence.
  2. Which excerpt omits the acknowledgment of members' cost concerns, and is that omission consistent with the density and mediation principles taught in Chapters 3 and 4? Explain.
  3. Identify the nominalized phrase in the formal brief and give its fuller verbal equivalent.
  4. Which excerpt would be least appropriate to hand a board member two minutes before the meeting, and why?

Writing Workshop

Build one complete mediated dossier from a single position, in four linked stages.

  1. Step 1 — Fix your position. Choose or receive a short workplace or institutional decision with at least one plausible objection (for example, from your own experience, your instructor, or a scenario adapted from earlier chapters).
  2. Step 2 — Draft the formal written brief. State your position, acknowledge the strongest objection, and qualify your recommendation, applying the argument structure from Chapter 2 and the register control from Chapter 1.
  3. Step 3 — Compress it into a one-page executive digest. Apply the nominalization and compression tools from Chapter 3, keeping the position, the condition, and the conclusion.
  4. Step 4 — Prepare a two-minute spoken briefing. Write brief speaking notes (not a full script) that you can deliver aloud, pacing your delivery as described in this chapter's pronunciation section.
  5. Step 5 — Mediate the dossier into English. Applying Chapter 4's mediation-decision sequence, produce a short English version for a reader who was not present, adding only the context that reader genuinely needs.
  6. Review your complete file against the checklist below.

قَائِمَة المُرَاجَعَة — Checklist:

  • All four versions state exactly the same underlying position and condition.
  • The formal brief states the position, acknowledges an objection, and qualifies the recommendation.
  • The digest is compressed but not distorted — it keeps the recommendation and its condition.
  • The spoken briefing is paced for a live listener, not read as written prose.
  • The English mediation adds only what an absent reader genuinely needs, and changes no essential claim.
  • No untaught grammar, vocabulary domain, or mood/case system was required.

Culture and Communication

Culture in Context — Consistency across a file as a mark of professional credibility

In many Arabic-speaking institutional and professional settings, a dossier whose components visibly disagree with one another — a digest that overstates a brief, a spoken briefing that omits a condition stated in writing — can damage the credibility of the person who produced it, regardless of how well any single component is written. Reviewers and colleagues in such settings often check a file for internal consistency as closely as they check any individual document for accuracy. Producing linked materials that agree with one another is treated as a professional skill in its own right, not an incidental detail.

Regional Variation — Expectations for dossier format and order

The expected order and format of a multi-part institutional file — which comes first, how formal the digest should sound, whether a spoken briefing is expected to closely follow written notes or depart from them more freely — varies across institutions, sectors, and countries within the Arabic-speaking world. Some settings favor a brief cover digest ahead of the full brief; others expect the reverse. Learners preparing materials for a specific institution or country should observe that institution's own conventions rather than assuming a single universal dossier format.

Common Mistakes to Avoid

Common Mistake — Letting the digest quietly change the position

Error: compressing a brief so aggressively that the condition attached to a recommendation disappears, leaving the digest stating a stronger or different claim than the brief actually supports.

Correction: after compressing, check the digest against the brief sentence by sentence for the position and its condition, not only for length; cut detail, never the claim itself.

Common Mistake — Reading the written brief aloud as the spoken briefing

Error: delivering the formal written brief's sentences aloud unchanged, producing a briefing that is too dense and too fast for a listener to follow in real time.

Correction: prepare separate speaking notes with shorter phrases and clear pauses, applying the spoken-mediation pacing from Chapter 4 rather than reading written prose at reading speed.

Common Mistake — Over-mediating for the outside reader

Error: adding so much background context to the English mediation that it becomes a full retelling of the meeting rather than a mediation of the file's essential content.

Correction: apply Chapter 4's mediation-decision sequence — identify only what this specific absent reader needs to understand the recommendation, and add nothing beyond that.

Chapter Summary

This chapter introduced no new language system. It asked you to combine register precision from Chapter 1, argument structure from Chapter 2, density control from Chapter 3, and mediation judgment from Chapter 4 into a single integrated dossier: a formal written brief, an executive digest, a spoken briefing, and an English mediation, all stating one consistent position for four different readers. You practiced building each component from the same underlying content and checking the complete file for unity of position rather than treating each piece in isolation. This integrated skill set closes Unit I and prepares you for Unit II, where these same tools will be applied to specialized public-facing domains such as legal, economic, and technical Arabic.

Chapter Review

Section A — Identification

1. Explain what "unity of position" requires across a mediated dossier's linked components, with reference to the Reading Practice excerpts.

2. Identify one addition that would be appropriate in an English mediation for an absent reader, and one addition that would go beyond what mediation permits.

Section B — Production

1. Write a short position statement (two to three sentences) in Arabic with one plausible objection.

2. Compress it into a one-sentence digest that preserves the position and any condition attached to it.

3. Produce a one-sentence English mediation of your position for a reader who was not present.

مُرَاجَعَة تَرَاكُمِيَّة — Cumulative review

This chapter recycles the register-choice judgment from Chapter 1, the argument architecture from Chapter 2, the density and nominalization tools from Chapter 3, the mediation-decision sequence from Chapter 4, and clause, verbal-noun, and construct-state systems consolidated in Volume IV. No case, mood, clause, or morphology system exceeds its Volume IV status here, and no chapter in this unit introduced heritage, dialect, or specialized-domain material beyond labeled, receptive background reference.

Practical Performance Task

مُهِمَّة تَطْبِيقِيَّة — Performance Task

مَلَفّ مُتَكَامِل — An Integrated Dossier

Submit the complete four-part dossier you built in the Writing Workshop, plus a recording or live delivery of your spoken briefing:

١ — المُذَكِّرَة الرَّسْمِيَّة — Formal Brief

A full written statement of your position, an acknowledged objection, and a qualified recommendation.

٢ — المُوجَز التَّنْفِيذِيّ — Executive Digest

A one-page compression of the brief that preserves the position and its condition.

٣ — الإِحَاطَة الشَّفَهِيَّة — Spoken Briefing

A two-minute spoken delivery, paced for a live listener, with brief speaking notes attached.

٤ — الوَسَاطَة الإِنْجْلِيزِيَّة — English Mediation

A short English version for a reader who was not present, with a one-sentence note explaining any addition you made.

  • all four components state exactly the same position and condition;
  • the formal brief shows clear register control and argument structure;
  • the digest is compressed without distortion;
  • the spoken briefing is genuinely paced for delivery, not read as written prose; and
  • every language system used was already consolidated in Volume IV or Chapters 1 through 5.

Check your complete file against the rubric below before considering it complete.

CriterionEvidence expected
Unity of positionAll four components state the same claim and condition without contradiction.
Argument structureThe formal brief states a position, acknowledges an objection, and qualifies the recommendation.
Density controlThe digest is meaningfully compressed while preserving essential content.
Spoken deliveryThe briefing is paced and phrased for a live listener, with audible structure.
Mediation judgmentThe English version adds only what the absent reader needs, with the addition explained.
Script and mechanicsCorrect directionality, spelling, and appropriate vocalization for the reading level.

Answer Key

Listening Practice

  • Position and condition: the committee recommends proceeding with the renovation proposal despite its higher expected cost, provided the budget is reviewed again before final approval.
  • Objection-acknowledging phrase: عَلَى الرَّغْم مِن ارتِفَاع تَكْلُفَتِه المُتَوَقَّعَة ("despite its higher projected cost") functions as the concession step in the thesis-concession-conclusion structure from Chapter 2.
  • Nominalized phrase: إِعَادَة النَّظَر فِي المِيزَانِيَّة; expanded equivalent: عِنْدَمَا يُعَاد النَّظَر فِي المِيزَانِيَّة.
  • Sample one-sentence digest: نُوصِي بِالمُضِيّ فِي المُقْتَرَح بَعْد مُرَاجَعَة مِيزَانِيَّتِه.

Reading Practice — Comprehension questions

  1. Shared position: the committee recommends proceeding with the proposal, on the condition that its budget is reviewed further.
  2. The executive digest omits the acknowledgment of members' cost concerns; this is consistent with Chapter 3's density principles, since the digest still preserves the recommendation and its condition — only supporting detail is cut, not the core claim.
  3. Nominalized phrase: مُرَاجَعَة إِضَافِيَّة; expanded equivalent: أَن تُرَاجَع المِيزَانِيَّة مَرَّة أُخْرَى.
  4. The formal brief would be least appropriate two minutes before the meeting, since its length and density are unsuited to a quick pre-meeting read; the digest suits that moment far better.

Chapter Review — Model responses

Section A: Unity of position means every version of the dossier — however compressed, however mediated into another language — must state the same underlying recommendation and the same condition attached to it; only supporting detail may vary by format. An appropriate mediation addition supplies context the absent reader genuinely lacks (for example, that they were not present at the meeting); an inappropriate addition introduces new claims, evidence, or qualifications not present in the source dossier.

Section B: Open-ended production; any accurate position statement, its faithfully compressed digest preserving position and condition, and an English mediation that adds no unjustified content are acceptable.

Looking Ahead

مَا الَّذِي تَسْتَطِيعُ فِعْلَهُ الآن — What you can do now

You can now produce a complete, internally consistent mediated dossier — a formal brief, a digest, a spoken briefing, and a cross-language mediation — that states one position precisely for four different readers. This closes Unit I: register precision, argument structure, density control, and mediation judgment are now available together as a single working toolkit. Unit II turns this toolkit toward specialized public-facing domains, beginning with legal and administrative Arabic.

الفَصْل ٦Chapter 6: Legal and Administrative Arabic

Chapter 6 opens Unit II by applying the register, argument, density, and mediation tools from Unit I to regulations, procedures, rights, obligations, and institutional forms, introducing specialized legal and administrative vocabulary within clearly labeled boundaries.